Savage Planet Caveman
(SciFi Romance): Book 2
Good start to world-building brought down by grammar mistakes
There was a good start to world-building, but it wasn’t fully realized. The novel would have to be much longer to fully flesh it out. Some explanations were good, but the story went back on our understanding later. For example, I understood the way Loraine learned Raxar’s language, but several chapters later, we are told Raxar knows English now. That was very confusing.
The conflict was too easily and quickly resolved. It could have used a lot more plot.
The grammar was terrible with wrong words, repeated words, and missing and extra quotation marks. It was very distracting.