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Fallen Crest Series – Tijan

Fallen Crest Series
Tijan

Rating: 4 out of 5.

A high school to college soap opera romance series

Fallen Crest High โ€“ Book 1

This is a guilty pleasure read. Itโ€™s a soap opera, a group of characters that Jerry Springer would jump at. The parents in this are terrible! They go from outright abusive to just not there. The teenagers are always having raging parties, setting things on fire, and fighting. Someone is always out to get them. These novels are mostly about catty, backstabbing, jealous people trying to hurt the three main characters โ€“ Sam, Mason, and Logan. Tons of teen angst. Itโ€™s so much drama that I have to forcibly suspend my disbelief and just let the telenovela happen. Embrace the crazy, and it is very amusing. There is a lot of humor in this, most of it coming from Logan.

I do like that Mason is a good guy to Sam. He is a complex character, good to her but can be manipulative and a jerk. But at least he is honest about it.

Samโ€™s character starts off numb. Sam doesnโ€™t care about anything. She seems to take everything in stride, being bored by all the teenage angst and drama around her. She is angry with her parents about their split and says so to both of them, but she doesnโ€™t lash out. She just goes running to escape. I didnโ€™t like that Samโ€™s character changed in the second book. She got weak for a while.

Logan is a slut, but he is also honest about that and so funny that I canโ€™t hate him for it.

This series is complete now and ends in a HEA.

This contains sex scenes, but they arenโ€™t graphic. We know what happened, but itโ€™s not as detailed as I usually see. The C and P words are not used. Instead, it is something like, โ€œHe was in me.โ€ The scenes get a bit more descriptive in the latter books when the characters are in college.

The entire series is in 1st person past tense. The first two books are all from Sam. In the rest of the series, we get some chapters from Mason too. We get a chapter from Logan in Book 5 (University). Logan Kade has chapters from both Logan and Taylor.

There are a ton of errors in the first book including wrong words and missing words. Itโ€™s not often enough to give me headaches but stretching it. The grammar gets better as the series goes on. I also felt that the plots got better as Tijan matured as an author over the series.



Fallen Crest Family โ€“ Book 2

Another soap opera. I didnโ€™t think this was as good as the first. The abuse stuff was brought up out of nowhere, and I didnโ€™t like how Samโ€™s character got weak.

In the second book, Sam is suddenly suffering PTSD from something her mom did when Sam was eleven. It never came up in the first book. It seems like Samโ€™s character was changed to conform to the desired plot. Because she stood up to her mother in the first book. Sam told her mother that their relationship was over, done, that she wished she hadnโ€™t been born to her mother. She also said she would move out as soon as she turned 18. And Sam does have the option of going to live with David, who fought for shared custody. It also seems very strange that Becky and Lydia would have suddenly abandoned Sam in the intervening time period when they had sworn loyalty to her at the end of the last book. Iโ€™m not buying it. Then the stuff about Sam being arrested as a runaway weeks before her 18th birthday and Mason possibly being charged with statutory rape was far from the legal facts. The changes are too stark, and I felt they were done to facilitate the desired plot here.


Fallen Crest Public โ€“ Book 3

The soap opera continues… This story is all about the mean girls and the queen bee going down, just like getting hit by a bus. But again, itโ€™s a guilty pleasure. Very cliche story line about a spurned girl who launches attacks on Sam because she wants Mason.


Favorite Quote:

โ€ฆMalinda. She always had a quick retort for Logan, and when there was a lull in conversation, sheโ€™d grill Mark on his love life. He was mortified when she suggested getting a vibrator for his girl. โ€œMom!โ€ he cried out. She shrugged. โ€œYouโ€™re not a virgin, and Iโ€™m promoting her pleasure as well. The girl will enjoy it a lot more. They donโ€™t always, you know.โ€ She scanned the rest of the table. โ€œIโ€™m sure you two bucks think youโ€™re the stud for all those does,โ€ she remembered me and amended, โ€œwell maybe just you and Logan, but Iโ€™m telling you. Girls fake it eighty percent of the time.โ€
That opened a whole new channel of adoration from Logan. He wanted to know it all.
The rest of the conversation was a question and answer forum from Logan while Mark looked ready to throw up. I even caught Mason listening intently to her. He told me later that heโ€™d be stupid to pass up information like that.


Fallen Fourth Down – Book 4

There would be so much less drama if they communicated with each other. Canโ€™t have that!

I like the screenshot of the texts.

Iโ€™m glad Sam has grown more of a backbone. In Fallen Crest Family, she got too weak for me.

Wow. I know this is a soap opera, but I keep getting shocked when it goes to that level. Hahaha There was a huge error in that near the start, Sam thought, โ€œMaybe it was time I tried drinking. Everyone else seemed to enjoy it.โ€ But she had been drunk so many times in the first three books! This was ridiculous. Alcohol was not new to her!


Fallen Crest University โ€“ Book 5

Mason is keeping secrets from Sam. Sam is keeping secrets from Mason. They are both trying to protect each other. If there arenโ€™t any secrets, there canโ€™t be any drama! ๐Ÿ˜‚


Fallen Crest Christmas

This is a Fallen Crest extra set right after University and before Logan Kade.

It is in 3rd person past tense.


Logan Kade โ€“ Book 5.5

We all know Logan is a slut and sometimes a man-whore, but I read this because of how funny he is! Oh yeah, do you know the difference? Sluts are just promiscuous, lacking respect for their own bodies. Man-whores make the women pay in some way, hurting them. I donโ€™t slut-shame. Iโ€™m not a fan of it, but whatever floats your boat. I just donโ€™t like reading about characters who are so casual about sex because itโ€™s a turn off for me. I really hate man-whores. They are bad people.

This was good, more fun, less of a soap opera. I really liked it until what happened near the end. Then I was disgusted! I have to knock at least a star off for Logan being far too much of a slut / manwhore.

Favorite Quote:

โ€œIโ€™m Logan Motherfucking Kade. Iโ€™d switch classes, too. I mean, shit. If I were a chick? Iโ€™d be all over me. I couldnโ€™t keep myself away from me.โ€ He let out a whistle. โ€œBring out the handcuffs and bullwhips. Weโ€™re going the BDSM route.โ€


Fallen Crest Home โ€“ Book 6

Near the beginning, everyone is worried about Sam and Mason being at a Roussou event, and they are always surrounded by people acting as bodyguards. Then the group lets Mason and Sam walk off alone to leave. It makes no sense that everyone would be worried at the beginning of the night and then let them leave alone. Stupid characters! ๐Ÿ™

Home ends on a cliffhanger that is so soap opera.

Favorite Quotes:

โ€œGood thing Iโ€™m Logan Kade. I mean, come on. If I wasnโ€™t the #sexmachine, I mightโ€™ve felt a little self-conscious.โ€ His eyes grew thoughtful. โ€œIโ€™d never noticed how ripped he is. I think he needs to cut back on some of his training. Heโ€™s lean cuisine now. Does it hurt? When youโ€™re bumping and grinding against him? Do all those hard muscles give you road rash or something?โ€

He smirked. โ€œYouโ€™re calling me the dumbass when youโ€™re the one who needs to be reminded how to eat. Put it in and chewโ€”unless itโ€™s Masonโ€™s dick. Donโ€™t chew then. Please, donโ€™t chew. I donโ€™t want to take my brother to the emergency room for that.โ€


Fallen Crest Forever โ€“ Book 7

The conclusion of the series with a HEA.


Malik (Carter Brother Series Book 1) – Lisa Helen Gray

Malik
Carter Brother Series Book 1
Lisa Helen Gray

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Bullied damsel in distress gets rescued by hot guy

Harlowโ€™s parents were murdered, and she has to move to her grandmotherโ€™s house in a new town. The five Carter brothers live with their grandfather, next door to Harlowโ€™s grandma. On the first day of school, Harlow makes an enemy of Davis, a bully. Malik Carter and his brothers protect Harlow from this creep. Harlow is also bullied by a girl in school.

I thought this was a bully romance at first, but itโ€™s not. The bully is a bad guy that Harlow is definitely not going to fall in love with.

I was disappointed with how weak Harlow was. I know she had just lost her parents, but she had been bullied at her old school before they died. I really wish Harlow would have stood up and fought back more against Davis. She is bit too damsel in distress for me. Knee him in the balls, scream, scratch, tear his eyes out, anything! I wanted her to stand up to the girls more as well. She is also down on herself, thinking she is plain, when it becomes clear that she is actually beautiful. I loved the secondary characters of the girls, Denny and Charlie. They were much stronger and fought back against bullying.

Malik was great! No complaints there.

Harlowโ€™s grandma is hilarious. She loves to pull pranks and make the grandkids feel uncomfortable. She was a big part of the humor in this book.

The pacing was good. It was a fast read. So one star for story/writing, one for Malik, and one for Harlowโ€™s grandma!

Two of Malikโ€™s brothers, Max and Mason, are man-whores. They each have books in this series, and Iโ€™m not excited about reading theirs. I was cautious, so I started reading the sample on Amazon of next book, Mason. There are many more errors in that one! Just reading the first few pages, I saw several issues. Malik needed another proofread, but it looks like Mason didnโ€™t get any. A quick peek at the next one, Myles, revealed the same issues. So I wonโ€™t be continuing with this series.


Trigger warning โ€“ there is a rape scene.

There are a few graphic sex scenes.

No cheating.

Contains foul language.

1st person present tense, from Harlow except for one chapter from Malik.

This is written in British English.

Errors: 27 (missing periods, extra commas, missing/wrong words, the first letter of a sentence not being capitalized)


Favorite Quotes:

(Harlow walks in on one of Malikโ€™s brothers taking a shower, and Malik runs in to see why she screamedโ€ฆ)
I want to roll my eyes at him, but Iโ€™m too embarrassed to move or to reopen my eyes. His penis was there; right there, in full view. My first live penis and itโ€™s a complete strangerโ€™s. I never wanted my first penis sighting to be like this. Just thinking about it has my cheeks heating.
โ€œCome on, Harlow,โ€ Malik orders, snapping me out of my penis trance. I let him drag me quietly out of the bathroom and into his room before I whirl around on him, my anger finally surfacing now that Iโ€™m safely away from the penis.
โ€œHow could you!โ€™โ€™ we say at the same time, both of us glaring at each other.โ€œ
“No, how could you? How dare you remove my clothes while Iโ€™m unconscious. How could you do that to me? Did you get a good look?โ€ I snap sarcastically as I move myself closer to him. โ€œDid you? I canโ€™t believe this. Not only does a boy see me nakedโ€”half-naked anywayโ€”for the first time, but Iโ€™m also unconscious through it. Then, to top that shit list, I see my very first penis. A very fucking frightening one. Theyโ€™re big, Malik. Fucking big,โ€ I cry out, feeling hysterical.

Malik: โ€œMy first thought in the morning is no longer about an upcoming race, or my boner, but you. Itโ€™s always about youโ€”and my boner.โ€

Malik (Joan is Harlowโ€™s grandma): โ€œJoan warnedโ€”okay, threatened me, that if I got dirt on her carpet, she was going to castrate me. I love my dick, babe, and Joan keeps threatening it.โ€

Joan: โ€œDonโ€™t go,โ€ she groans. โ€œI need some advice on other things too. Like, do you think I should get some Viagra? Iโ€™m known to go all night.โ€


(Joan and Mark, Malikโ€™s grandfather, get caught making out on the sofaโ€ฆ)
I mumble, before turning to Grams. โ€œSay goodnight, then get to bed. If I donโ€™t hear the door shutโ€”with Mark on the other sideโ€”I wonโ€™t be pleased, Grams.โ€
โ€œShush, child. Itโ€™s not like you havenโ€™t got Malik upstairs,โ€ she tells me like a sulking teenager.
She does have a point.
โ€œYes, but weโ€™re kids. Youโ€™re adults. You shouldnโ€™t be fondling on the sofa at your age,โ€ I defend. โ€œSay goodnight, then go to sleep.โ€
Walking up the stairs, I canโ€™t help but grimace when I hear Grams asking when they can fondle again.
Jesus, pass me a bucket.


The Sainthood : A Dark High School Romance (The Complete Series) – Siobhan Davis

The Sainthood
A Dark High School Romance
The Complete Series
Siobhan Davis

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Dark, reverse harem, high school, organized crime, romance

There is a ton of sex in these books! Itโ€™s very long, and it has a lot of story too. But the sex to story ratio is much higher than I usually see. Harlow could be a nymphomaniac, so itโ€™s good she has four guys to keep up with her. I mean there is sexually confident, and then there is, โ€œI draw the line at full-on prostitution, but most everything else is fair game.โ€ Itโ€™s downright raunchy. Donโ€™t get me wrong, a lot of it is hot, but some of it was a bit much for me, mostly the hate sex. And I regularly read and enjoy novels with graphic sexual content.

The beginning of this is a bully story but make that a gang, as in large criminal organization, bullying the girl. The whole backstory for this novel is disgusting. I hate that all the teens treat sex so casually, completely separating it from emotions. Itโ€™s difficult to get past all this. If this were me, I would have gotten the hell out of there, moved to a different country or something.

The gang stuff and what the guys do to Harlow in the beginning was crazy. I was having trouble suspending disbelief. Harlowโ€™s superhero level skill set, strength, and attitude in the face of all this was stretching credibility. Itโ€™s like all the main characters are a trained army. Death means nothing to them. Natural born killers.

By Chapter 18 of the first book, I was feeling like this was going to be too long. I was waiting for something to actually happen. By Chapter 26, 22% into the box set, Iโ€™d had enough of the hate sex and was still waiting for something to happen. I had to take a break and read something else. I am glad I went back to this because it got much better, but I can see a lot of readers dropping out at or before this point. When I got back into it, things really started to happen in the story, and the sex scenes got very hot. By the end, I was happy I had read this. But I can only give it 3 stars. I liked Surviving Amber Springs so much better!

Itโ€™s got an HEA with a cute bonus novella at the end.

1st person present tense, mostly from Harlow, but with a smattering of chapters from each of the guys.

This is well edited. I only found 9 errors.



Favorite Quotes:

Harlow: I have zero desire to live in my own twisted romance novel.

โ€œThey built the facility in the middle of Mantiss Forest andโ€”โ€
โ€œThe Sainthood sure is obsessed with forests,โ€ I interject.
โ€œItโ€™s ideal burial ground,โ€ Saint replies, glancing at me as he steers the Land Rover out onto the highway. โ€œPerfect for disposing of enemies and annoying girls who interrupt people midsentence.โ€

โ€œI think I got pregnant just watching that,โ€ Caz jokes.

โ€œI was so tempted to slice off his dick,โ€ I admit. โ€œLike, I seriously had to talk myself off that ledge.โ€
Caz chuckles. โ€œYou couldnโ€™t deprive us of that sight. When you chop his cock off, I want a front-row seat.โ€
I lean back for a knuckle touch. โ€œDeal, dude. Wouldnโ€™t want to deprive you of such quality entertainment.โ€ “


Clearwater University: The Complete Series: An Enemies-to-Lovers Romance – Eva Ashwood

Clearwater University
The Complete Series
An Enemies-to-Lovers Romance
Eva Ashwood

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Reverse harem doesnโ€™t occur to them for quite a while!

Emma became best friends with three boys her sophomore year of high school. In her junior year, they turned on her and became her bullies. She and her father moved away but are back in town two years later. Emma starts college, and her tormentors are there and still hating her.

This one was different for several reasons:

1. The hate part of this hate to love goes on for quite a while, well into the second book. Iโ€™m more accustomed to the hate part ending much sooner, so that was a twist. And we still get sex scenes while the hate is still strong. So if you like hate sex, youโ€™ll enjoy this.

2. The reverse harem or menage relationship idea doesnโ€™t occur to the group for quite a while. In most of these, the characters are aware of the possibility from the start. Sometimes they know people in poly relationships. Sometimes at least one of the characters has read books like we are reading right now. But in Clearwater, they donโ€™t realize it is a thing for quite a while and then donโ€™t think it would work because โ€“

3. The guys are competitive, jealous, and angry at each other for most of this. They have been best friends forever, but their relationship has been beaten down by what they have done to Emma. Most of the time, the guys are a team from the start. So I liked they we got some unusual twists here!

The writing was very good. It is long with the three novels together, but it was fast paced. I liked the characters, that the guys all had distinct personalities, and that they all grew over the course of the story.

I didnโ€™t like that Trentโ€™s reason for turning on Emma is immature. We know what it is early on, so I donโ€™t think this is a spoiler. Trent thinks Emma told his father that they saw Trentโ€™s mom kissing Emmaโ€™s dad. And this results in his parents getting divorced. By the time I was 16/17, I knew that marriages are complicated, and cheating is a symptom of greater issues. Trentโ€™s anger at this small thing, even if true, seemed like an 8-10 year oldโ€™s perspective. And then, he gets even angrier when he finds out that Emma introduced his mother to her father at a school event. Why hadnโ€™t Emma and the guys all introduced their parents around when they were still friends in high school? It seems very weird that their parents would let them hang out so much and be best friends without ever meeting their parents. We only see Emmaโ€™s dad and Trentโ€™s mom, but they donโ€™t seem like disconnected, neglectful parents. These are the type of parents that I believe would have insisted on meeting the parents of their kidโ€™s friends. Even if not, they are treating the introduction of their parents as something unusual. Especially when the parents are at the same school event, you just would introduce them. So I had a difficult time suspending disbelief for this.

Another complaint I have is more difficult to talk about without spoilers. Itโ€™s the total 180 of a character that came out of nowhere. It felt like we didnโ€™t get any lead in to this, like we suddenly need a villain, so weโ€™ll change this character completely. I would have preferred more detail on the character and on their past actions, which would make this turnaround more natural and believable.

Because of these two things, I can only give this three stars. But if they wonโ€™t bother you as much as they did me, and you mostly want the hot sex scenes, you may enjoy this more than I did.

Contains many graphic sex scenes. Some are one-on-one and some are group. There is no cheating, scenes with Other People, or Other People drama. There is no non or dubious consent. So this is SAFE. No trigger warnings. Contains foul language. It is well edited. I found 5 little errors.

Fostering Hope (Silver Lining Book 1) – Amanda Perry

Fostering Hope
Silver Lining Book 1
Amanda Perry

Rating: 4 out of 5.

New adult clean reverse harem

After shuffling from one bad foster home to another, Parker is finally taken in by a good family. They have seven sons. Five of them are older than Parker.

This was a clean reverse harem romance, which Iโ€™ve never run into before. There is kissing but just that, no more. I really liked it. It was sweet and a fast read. There was no insta-love. Feelings built slowly. It had some good humor in it, especially with the character of Austyn.

1st person present tense from Parker and the guys.

I found 24 errors. A lot of them were weird like the first letter at the start of a sentence not being capitalized. Word should fix that on its own.

There is some foul language in this.

Surviving Amber Springs: A Stand-alone Contemporary Romance – Siobhan Davis

Surviving Amber Springs
A Stand-alone Contemporary Romance
Siobhan Davis

Rating: 5 out of 5.

High school to college reverse harem romance with crazy feels!

Blaire moved in the middle of her senior year of high school to a new town after her twin brother died. Before school starts, she meets three amazing and hot guys. They had been best friends forever and almost immediately all want her.

I loved this. 5 stars because I would read it again. It was extremely written making for a fast read even though it was pretty long. It needed every word. Things were revealed at the right times along the way, and I donโ€™t want to give any spoilers. Blaire has gone through hell and continues to do so. The story is dramatic but feels real, not like a soap opera. Itโ€™s a story of emotions, good ones, bad ones, and complicated ones.

The characters were complicated and felt real as well. I loved Shaznay, the sister of one of the guys, and she provided some much-needed humor. The sex scenes were hot and added to the story. The story is amazing. Iโ€™d never thought about the families of the instigators of these crimes and what hell it must be for them.

Warnings: This contains references to gun crimes, rape, suicide, and self-harm. Nothing bad happens between the main characters, no non or dubious consent. There are several graphic sex scenes. All are one-on-one, no group sex.

1st person present tense from Blaire. Midway through we get sections from the guys. This was very well edited. I only found 8 errors.

Trick Me Twice: An Enemies to Lovers High School Bully Romance – Becca Steele

Trick Me Twice
An Enemies to Lovers High School Bully Romance
Becca Steele

Rating: 4 out of 5.

Hot British high school bully romance

Carter is a king of the school. Raine is keeping herself hidden away. She seemed weak at first, but she slowly comes out of her shell and becomes strong. I was happy with her by the end. Carter had to mature and get stronger as well. I liked both of these characters because they had flaws and grew as the story progressed. I also liked many of the secondary characters.

The writing was choppy and uncomfortable at first but quickly got better for me. It was a quick read. I wasnโ€™t bored anywhere. I liked it a lot but didnโ€™t love it, so four stars.

This contains three graphic sex scenes, so there is much more story than sex. There is quite a bit of foul language.

1st person past tense from Carter and Raine.

This book is well edited. It is written in British English. Only 8 errors interrupted me.

Full Contact: A College Reverse Harem Romance – Cassie Cole

Full Contact
A College Reverse Harem Romance
Cassie Cole

Rating: 4 out of 5.

College RH with three hot football players

Let me begin by saying, โ€œI hate football.โ€ For me, itโ€™s associated with the men in my family screaming at the TV. Iโ€™ve always hated conflict and raised voices, so this made me cringe. It also broke my concentration when I was trying to read! I was dragged to football games because my parents didnโ€™t want to get a babysitter, so I sat in the stands reading and hating all the rude noise around me. But with all that, I still loved this novel!

I read a paramedic romance last year and knew nothing about that world and loved that novel too. See Crossing The Line. This felt a lot like that. I didnโ€™t understand the football jargon, trusted the author knew what she was talking about, and just moved past it. It added to the realism and didnโ€™t bore me. I think football fans will enjoy it immensely.

The writing was great, aside from unnecessary dialogue tags. It was fast paced with a lot of story. So this isnโ€™t just erotica. But the sex scenes were very hot. This is also SAFE โ€“ no cheating, no Other People problems at all, which was very nice. There was no slut-shaming or villain girls! Overall, I highly recommend this if you like reverse harem / menage romances. Itโ€™s a plus if you like football, but it isnโ€™t necessary that you do.

1st person past tense from Roberta and the three guys.

This is well edited. I found 10 errors. There are also some unnecessary dialogue tags, but there werenโ€™t enough to bother me.



Favorite Quotes:

The outline of his huge cock slid against his shorts, falling across to rest against his other thigh. I got the impression it wasnโ€™t fully hard, but it was thick. Like a damn extra-large stick of Toblerone chocolate.

Aly made an annoyed noise. โ€œDo you have to talk about football? Iโ€™m trying to enjoy all these hunks in tight pants.โ€
โ€œOh, sorry. Didnโ€™t mean to interrupt what really matters.โ€

Feรฑa was wearing a Ralph Lauren polo shirt, and his dark curls looked like theyโ€™d been freshly washed. But below the waist he wore baggy basketball shorts and a pair of gym sneakers. It was a hilarious juxtaposition of styles. Attractive college boy on top, and lazy athlete on the bottom. Like a fashion mullet.

I could see why women loved dating bikers. It was like riding around on a big vibrator.



Kings of Linwood Academy – The Complete Box Set: A Dark High School Romance Series – Callie Rose

Kings of Linwood Academy
The Complete Box Set:
A Dark High School Romance Series
Callie Rose

Rating: 4 out of 5.

Hot reverse harem high school murder mystery

Harlow and her mom move from Arizona to a wealthy east coast town. Her mom is hired to be the live-in Executive Housekeeper for the Black family. Their teenage son Lincoln and his best friends, River, Dax, and Chase hate Harlow immediately. They rule the school and lead her torture there. Then the five of them witness a murder by a man in a mask.

I liked this a lot, but I wouldnโ€™t want to read it again. Murder mysteries have much lower re-readability for me, since Iโ€™m not going to forget who done it. Iโ€™m not a big fan of mystery novels in general, so itโ€™s harder to make me love them. And this is very long. I can see why it was broken into three books, but it felt overly long. The pacing was good for most of this, but I got bored for a while in the third book.

This is definitely teen erotica. If youโ€™re against that, walk away now. Personally, Iโ€™m a fan. I donโ€™t want to do things with teenagers in real life, but I like to imagine myself back as a teenager. And reading about teens having sex doesnโ€™t bother me. When I was 16, everyone I knew was having sex. I havenโ€™t forgotten that just because Iโ€™m older now. Itโ€™s actually quite realistic in that regard. There are many sex scenes in this, some with just one guy and others with two or all of them, but there is a lot more story than sex here. Recreational marijuana use appears a few times here, which also matches my teenage experience.

I liked all the characters. Harlow isnโ€™t timid. Sheโ€™s got a mouth on her and takes the initial abuse well, doesnโ€™t cry and moan about how unfair it all is. She just says how these rich fucks must be bored. I liked that Harlow had a very realistic reaction to seeing someone die. She goes into shock for a bit and then canโ€™t sleep or eat for days. Too many times I see characters handling things like this like it was no big deal, the story on to something else. Iโ€™m glad to see a realistic reaction for once.

I loved that all four of the guys had distinct personalities and werenโ€™t just clones of each other, even the twins. Chase and Dax are almost identical twins but have enough physical differences to be told apart. Their personalities are widely different. All four guys are somewhat possessive and protective, but they donโ€™t smother Harlow. I also loved Harlowโ€™s mom and that someone in this novel has a good parent.

1st person present tense, all from Harlowโ€™s perspective.

This novel is well edited until the end of the third book. I found 3 errors between the first two books. I found 11 errors in the third book alone, mostly subject-verb agreements.


Favorite Quotes:

โ€œDonโ€™t fall in love with any rich boys. Theyโ€™re trouble.โ€

When Harlowโ€™s mom is going on a date: I make her promise to be home by midnight and use protection, because Iโ€™ve gotta give her a little shit while Iโ€™m at it, right?

Having four boyfriends, as amazing as it is, isnโ€™t great for staying clean.

I grit my teeth. โ€œBecause Iโ€™m collecting boyfriends, and I want to raise the average age of my harem.โ€



Slateview High – The Complete Series: A Dark High School Romance – Eva Ashwood

Slateview High
The Complete Series:
A Dark High School Romance
Eva Ashwood

Rating: 5 out of 5.

High School Reverse Harem / Menage Romance

Cora is the sheltered daughter of Baltimore social elite. Her world comes crashing down when her father is arrested and put in jail, all his assets frozen. Cora and her mother have to move across to a town to dilapidated rental house. Cora has to go to the public school there, where she is hated by everyone. Three boys, called the Lost Boys, Bishop, Kace, and Misael, offer her protection, if she will be theirs.

Itโ€™s called a dark romance, but I didnโ€™t find it that dark. I wouldnโ€™t even really say it is hate to love because the hate doesnโ€™t go on that long. There is no dubious or non consent. The characterโ€™s ages arenโ€™t given until the last book. We just know they are seniors in high school. There are some very hot sex scenes, not many in the first book, but they pick up in the second and third. Itโ€™s definitely an erotic novel. This contains recreational use of marijuana and underage alcohol use but no other drugs.

Cora is strong. She discovers her inner strength because of what she goes through and grows across the story. Sheโ€™s a fighter and holds her own with the boys. I liked all three boys and very much appreciated that they all have distinct personalities and differences. It always bothers me that many menage romances have lead men that are basically clones of each other.

This is fast paced read with a lot of drama. Iโ€™m glad all the books are packed into one because they really are one. The last paragraph of the first connects to the first paragraph of the next without any introduction. I wouldnโ€™t really call the โ€œendingsโ€ cliffhangers because the current action has wrapped up. We just donโ€™t have all the story yet. There is a satisfying full ending at the end of the third book. There isnโ€™t an epilogue with future scenes, but I didnโ€™t think it was needed. The characters go through enough that you know what will happen in their future.

I loved this. It was a perfect blend of story and erotica. 5 stars because I would read it again.

1st person past tense, all from Coraโ€™s perspective.

The dialogue is often in the next paragraph after the action sequence. Itโ€™s weird but consistent. Might be done for style effect. It didnโ€™t bother me.

This is very well edited. I only found 2 errors, which is amazing.