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Malik (Carter Brother Series Book 1) – Lisa Helen Gray

Malik
Carter Brother Series Book 1
Lisa Helen Gray

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Bullied damsel in distress gets rescued by hot guy

Harlowโ€™s parents were murdered, and she has to move to her grandmotherโ€™s house in a new town. The five Carter brothers live with their grandfather, next door to Harlowโ€™s grandma. On the first day of school, Harlow makes an enemy of Davis, a bully. Malik Carter and his brothers protect Harlow from this creep. Harlow is also bullied by a girl in school.

I thought this was a bully romance at first, but itโ€™s not. The bully is a bad guy that Harlow is definitely not going to fall in love with.

I was disappointed with how weak Harlow was. I know she had just lost her parents, but she had been bullied at her old school before they died. I really wish Harlow would have stood up and fought back more against Davis. She is bit too damsel in distress for me. Knee him in the balls, scream, scratch, tear his eyes out, anything! I wanted her to stand up to the girls more as well. She is also down on herself, thinking she is plain, when it becomes clear that she is actually beautiful. I loved the secondary characters of the girls, Denny and Charlie. They were much stronger and fought back against bullying.

Malik was great! No complaints there.

Harlowโ€™s grandma is hilarious. She loves to pull pranks and make the grandkids feel uncomfortable. She was a big part of the humor in this book.

The pacing was good. It was a fast read. So one star for story/writing, one for Malik, and one for Harlowโ€™s grandma!

Two of Malikโ€™s brothers, Max and Mason, are man-whores. They each have books in this series, and Iโ€™m not excited about reading theirs. I was cautious, so I started reading the sample on Amazon of next book, Mason. There are many more errors in that one! Just reading the first few pages, I saw several issues. Malik needed another proofread, but it looks like Mason didnโ€™t get any. A quick peek at the next one, Myles, revealed the same issues. So I wonโ€™t be continuing with this series.


Trigger warning โ€“ there is a rape scene.

There are a few graphic sex scenes.

No cheating.

Contains foul language.

1st person present tense, from Harlow except for one chapter from Malik.

This is written in British English.

Errors: 27 (missing periods, extra commas, missing/wrong words, the first letter of a sentence not being capitalized)


Favorite Quotes:

(Harlow walks in on one of Malikโ€™s brothers taking a shower, and Malik runs in to see why she screamedโ€ฆ)
I want to roll my eyes at him, but Iโ€™m too embarrassed to move or to reopen my eyes. His penis was there; right there, in full view. My first live penis and itโ€™s a complete strangerโ€™s. I never wanted my first penis sighting to be like this. Just thinking about it has my cheeks heating.
โ€œCome on, Harlow,โ€ Malik orders, snapping me out of my penis trance. I let him drag me quietly out of the bathroom and into his room before I whirl around on him, my anger finally surfacing now that Iโ€™m safely away from the penis.
โ€œHow could you!โ€™โ€™ we say at the same time, both of us glaring at each other.โ€œ
“No, how could you? How dare you remove my clothes while Iโ€™m unconscious. How could you do that to me? Did you get a good look?โ€ I snap sarcastically as I move myself closer to him. โ€œDid you? I canโ€™t believe this. Not only does a boy see me nakedโ€”half-naked anywayโ€”for the first time, but Iโ€™m also unconscious through it. Then, to top that shit list, I see my very first penis. A very fucking frightening one. Theyโ€™re big, Malik. Fucking big,โ€ I cry out, feeling hysterical.

Malik: โ€œMy first thought in the morning is no longer about an upcoming race, or my boner, but you. Itโ€™s always about youโ€”and my boner.โ€

Malik (Joan is Harlowโ€™s grandma): โ€œJoan warnedโ€”okay, threatened me, that if I got dirt on her carpet, she was going to castrate me. I love my dick, babe, and Joan keeps threatening it.โ€

Joan: โ€œDonโ€™t go,โ€ she groans. โ€œI need some advice on other things too. Like, do you think I should get some Viagra? Iโ€™m known to go all night.โ€


(Joan and Mark, Malikโ€™s grandfather, get caught making out on the sofaโ€ฆ)
I mumble, before turning to Grams. โ€œSay goodnight, then get to bed. If I donโ€™t hear the door shutโ€”with Mark on the other sideโ€”I wonโ€™t be pleased, Grams.โ€
โ€œShush, child. Itโ€™s not like you havenโ€™t got Malik upstairs,โ€ she tells me like a sulking teenager.
She does have a point.
โ€œYes, but weโ€™re kids. Youโ€™re adults. You shouldnโ€™t be fondling on the sofa at your age,โ€ I defend. โ€œSay goodnight, then go to sleep.โ€
Walking up the stairs, I canโ€™t help but grimace when I hear Grams asking when they can fondle again.
Jesus, pass me a bucket.


Triple Play: A Sports Reverse Harem Romance – Cassie Cole

Triple Play
A Sports Reverse Harem Romance
Cassie Cole

Rating: 4 out of 5.

Baseball reverse harem romance

Natalie is hired on as the assistant pitching coach for a major league baseball team. Raphael and Joel are pitchers. Darryl plays first base and is a star hitter.

I actually like baseball, so this was much more my speed. The many baseball details and the suspense in the game descriptions were terrific. It was a great story about baseball as well as a romance. The sex scenes were hot, and there was a good amount of humor in this.

The only thing I didnโ€™t like was how quickly Natalie fell into bed with Raphael. This happens early on, so itโ€™s not a spoiler. It felt like a cheesy porno set up like the hot guy delivering a pizza and suddenly they are having sex. I wasnโ€™t a fan. I definitely wanted more chemistry in their interactions and getting to know one another before they had sex. But the novel got much better from there!

There is a cute little bonus epilogue chapter online set 15 years later.

SAFE โ€“ no cheating, Other People drama, love triangles, or non or dubious consent.

Graphic sex scenes both one-on-one and group. No touching between the men.

Occasional foul language.

1st person past tense from Natalie and all three guys.

There are some unnecessary dialogue tags, but not so many as to detract from the pacing.

Alright is not a word, itโ€™s all right. Mom/Dad should be capitalized like a proper name. Aside from that, I only found 8 errors, so this is very well edited.

The Good Guys Series – Jamie Schlosser

The Good Guys Series
Jamie Schlosser

Rating: 5 out of 5.

If you need a break from overused cliches, angst, evil villains, or tearjerkers, dip into this series!

I read the first book, Trucker, a long time ago. I remember at the time thinking I would save these for when I needed a break from angst and difficult reads. I really needed that break after The Sainthood series! Iโ€™d been in gangland with murder and raunchy sex for too long. I needed something nice and sweet. So I binged the rest of the series. It was just what I needed. They are all so cute! I had plenty of laugh out loud moments.

They are feel-good reads without being over the top or sugary. They are like real vanilla, not the cheap imitation stuff, with deep notes of true flavor. When Iโ€™ve been having a lot of Rocky Road and other complicated or sour flavors, itโ€™s just so refreshing to savor something so genuine and real. If you need a break from overused cliches, angst, evil villains, or tearjerkers, dip into this series!

They are all SAFE โ€“ NO: cheating, sex scenes with Other People, love triangles, abuse, non or dubious consent, or cliffhangers! They do contain occasional foul language and graphic sex scenes, which are very hot. These are emotional. People make love in these books.

I especially love that the author turns cliches around. A familiar situation comes up, but the characters react to it in a different, usually saner, way.

Each book is written in 1st person past tense with about half the chapters from each of the two main characters.

They are all very well edited. I only found a few errors in each.

Alright is not a word! Itโ€™s all right. I swear!


1. Trucker

Travis picks Angel up when she starts to hitchhike across the country.

This was so frigging cute. Itโ€™s a light-hearted, feel-good read. I loved that both the leads are virgins. Travisโ€™ horror date stories were hilarious. I laughed out loud several times while reading this.

The only thing I didnโ€™t like was the OW drama. It was just another woman that wanted Travis, mean girl stuff, no touching at all between H and OW. Very cliche, but at least it was over quickly!

Angel was naive and far too trusting, but sheโ€™s very young (17/18). Itโ€™s nice to see that life hadnโ€™t beaten that out of her already.


2. Dancer

Brielle โ€œEllieโ€ and Colton were best friends as children until Colton moved away when they were seven years old. Now in their early twenties, Brielle is a cage dancer in a nightclub. Her clothes stay on. She is a single mother, having gotten pregnant as a senior in high school. We met Colton in Trucker. He is Travisโ€™ roommate and also a mechanic like Travis. Colton has been having erectile dysfunction, performance anxiety. But that magically clears up when he sees a certain cage dancer performing, and he has to meet her.

They arenโ€™t virgins in this one, but they havenโ€™t been promiscuous either.

Coltonโ€™s autocorrect texts are hilarious! Iโ€™ve been to webpages that list these things and laughed so much, so itโ€™s like having one of those sprinkled throughout. He talked about wanting to get his phone fixed, and I yelled, โ€œNo! No fixing Coltonโ€™s phone!โ€ And Brielleโ€™s kid is fabulously funny as well.


Favorite Quotes:

โ€œDid you ever think maybe you just didnโ€™t like her? I mean, maybe your dick knew better than you,โ€ he joked, making light of the situation.


Me: My dad is a nympho gopher.
Travis: Hahaha.
Me: Dammit! A nosy gossip.


Me: Where spank tits tomorrow?
Ellie: Are you talking dirty to me?


Unfortunately, I got mixed results. Apparently when your internet search contains โ€˜giant ballsโ€™ you need to be prepared for anything.


3. Dropout

Mackenna is a reclusive song writer who recently moved next door to Beverly, the fantastic old lady that we first met in Trucker. Beverly is Jimmyโ€™s grandmother. He moves in with her for the summer after failing his first year of college.

If I have to choose, this is my favorite. There is so much humor in this. We have Beverly, where all my favorite quotes below come from. Then there is Sweet Pea, the cussing parrot who poops everywhere. And finally we have Jimmy himself with his tightie camouflage underwear.

Mackenna had an abusive boyfriend in high school and stayed away from men after that. She isnโ€™t interested in dating anyone, but Jimmy is hard to resist. I loved how their relationship slowly progressed, starting with just holding hands. It was very realistic and just what Mackenna needed. So sweet!


Favorite Quotes:

Beverly Louise Johnson was the coolest motherfucking lady in the entire world. She was brutally honest, didnโ€™t take anyoneโ€™s crap, and swore like a sailor. On more than one occasion, my parents had said they thought I inherited my wild streak from her.

โ€œRule number two,โ€ she continued. โ€œNo hanky panky in the hot tub. Iโ€™ve never broken that rule and neither will you.โ€
I made a face. โ€œGrandma. No offense, but gross.โ€

โ€œWell Iโ€™ll be damned, Jimmy,โ€ she said, looking misty-eyed. Then she motioned toward my chest again. โ€œWhat about the piercings? Did that hurt?โ€ Looking down at her housecoat, she added, โ€œMaybe I should get some.โ€
A rude sound escaped at the awful suggestion. โ€œGrandmaโ€ฆ no. God, no.โ€
โ€œSeriously. I think Ernie might like it.โ€
Mortified, I ran a hand over my face. โ€œPlease stop talking.โ€

Jimmy, Iโ€™m shacking up at Ernieโ€™s for the night. Be nice to Sweet Pea and give him a peanut. Thereโ€™s a bag in the pantry. P.S. Donโ€™t you dare tease me about doing the walk of shame in the morning. -Grandma


4. Outcast

Ezra is Jimmyโ€™s little brother, whom we met in Dropout, and Kayla is his classmate. The story starts at the end of their senior year in high school. Ezra is a little overweight and walks with a limp. He has been bullied and teased his entire life. Kayla is very interestingly mixed race and always gets asked, โ€œWhat are you?โ€ It turns out they have both been crushing on each other for a long time.

They are both virgins in this.

I loved Ezraโ€™s service dog, Pierre. He wasnโ€™t comic relief. Heโ€™s a very serious fellow with a job to do! There is still a lot of humor in this. Kayla was adopted by a gay couple, and they are hilarious.


Favorite Quote:

Clearly, sheโ€™d been both afraid and impressed by my size. I knew I wasnโ€™t small down there. It wasnโ€™t something I ever flaunted, because my dick wasnโ€™t anyoneโ€™s business. Except Kaylaโ€™s. It could be her business anytime she wanted it to be.


5. Magic Man

We met Jay and Casey briefly in Dropout. Casey was 16 and knocked up by Mackennaโ€™s psycho ex. Jay got busted for meth dealing that night of the fight. Jay is just recently out of jail and doesnโ€™t think he is worthy of Casey and her son, Gus. Casey is an adult now and concentrating on taking care of her son.

This one had more angst and sadness in it but not too much. Itโ€™s not a tearjerker. Still a feel-good story with a HEA. We have a case of a character being an idiot, but it at least it didnโ€™t go on too long, and there was no cheating or OP involved.

Gus was a very cute and funny toddler. I loved that they let him play with jewelry and wear princess dresses since thatโ€™s what he wanted. They didnโ€™t judge or worry, even in their thoughts. Kids want they want, and it doesnโ€™t have to be traditionally gender-assigned toys and clothes. Gus might change his tastes as he gets older, and he might not. Either is fine. He might grow up to up be straight, gay, or anything in between, and all of that is fine. They are letting him be who he is and not worrying about it, which is very refreshing in a novel.


Favorite Quotes:

I had a lot of nicknames for my little dude. Buddy. Bud. Bubbie goo. Mister buddy goo goobie goo man. Sometimes I got a little obnoxious with itโ€”I even had made-up theme songs just for him.

Jay: Not having anything to contribute to a conversation about birthing large objects, I stuffed my hands in my pockets while they went into some of the nitty gritty details of labor.

โ€œI brought you a funnel cake,โ€ he announced, clearly pleased with himself. As he should be. If I hadnโ€™t already been planning to jump his bones, I certainly wouldโ€™ve been now.


6. Loner

ROSALIE
Iโ€™ve been a prisoner in my own home for as long as I can remember. My mother says Iโ€™m sick in the head, and thatโ€™s why I canโ€™t leave. And maybe sheโ€™s right.

But that doesnโ€™t stop me from watching our new groundskeeper from my window and wanting things I shouldnโ€™t. Like his hands on my body. His lips on my skin. Just him and me, running free in the world.

All I want is a normal life, but itโ€™s a fantasy. Insanity.

Because no one would want a crazy girl like me.

PRESTON
I broke the cardinal rule of the private investigator businessโ€”I fell for my clientโ€™s daughter. When I agreed to go undercover to get Rosalie out of her house, I had every intention of bringing her to her father. After all, itโ€™s what he hired me to do.

But Rosalieโ€™s life is a tangled web of mystery, tragedy, and lies. Her loneliness calls to mine, tempting me with a chance at redemption I never thought Iโ€™d have. I refuse to deliver her from one hell to another.

Even if it means risking my life.

Although LONER is the sixth book in the Good Guys series, it can be read as a complete standalone.

I haven’t read this yet but plan to when I need a break.


The Sainthood : A Dark High School Romance (The Complete Series) – Siobhan Davis

The Sainthood
A Dark High School Romance
The Complete Series
Siobhan Davis

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Dark, reverse harem, high school, organized crime, romance

There is a ton of sex in these books! Itโ€™s very long, and it has a lot of story too. But the sex to story ratio is much higher than I usually see. Harlow could be a nymphomaniac, so itโ€™s good she has four guys to keep up with her. I mean there is sexually confident, and then there is, โ€œI draw the line at full-on prostitution, but most everything else is fair game.โ€ Itโ€™s downright raunchy. Donโ€™t get me wrong, a lot of it is hot, but some of it was a bit much for me, mostly the hate sex. And I regularly read and enjoy novels with graphic sexual content.

The beginning of this is a bully story but make that a gang, as in large criminal organization, bullying the girl. The whole backstory for this novel is disgusting. I hate that all the teens treat sex so casually, completely separating it from emotions. Itโ€™s difficult to get past all this. If this were me, I would have gotten the hell out of there, moved to a different country or something.

The gang stuff and what the guys do to Harlow in the beginning was crazy. I was having trouble suspending disbelief. Harlowโ€™s superhero level skill set, strength, and attitude in the face of all this was stretching credibility. Itโ€™s like all the main characters are a trained army. Death means nothing to them. Natural born killers.

By Chapter 18 of the first book, I was feeling like this was going to be too long. I was waiting for something to actually happen. By Chapter 26, 22% into the box set, Iโ€™d had enough of the hate sex and was still waiting for something to happen. I had to take a break and read something else. I am glad I went back to this because it got much better, but I can see a lot of readers dropping out at or before this point. When I got back into it, things really started to happen in the story, and the sex scenes got very hot. By the end, I was happy I had read this. But I can only give it 3 stars. I liked Surviving Amber Springs so much better!

Itโ€™s got an HEA with a cute bonus novella at the end.

1st person present tense, mostly from Harlow, but with a smattering of chapters from each of the guys.

This is well edited. I only found 9 errors.



Favorite Quotes:

Harlow: I have zero desire to live in my own twisted romance novel.

โ€œThey built the facility in the middle of Mantiss Forest andโ€”โ€
โ€œThe Sainthood sure is obsessed with forests,โ€ I interject.
โ€œItโ€™s ideal burial ground,โ€ Saint replies, glancing at me as he steers the Land Rover out onto the highway. โ€œPerfect for disposing of enemies and annoying girls who interrupt people midsentence.โ€

โ€œI think I got pregnant just watching that,โ€ Caz jokes.

โ€œI was so tempted to slice off his dick,โ€ I admit. โ€œLike, I seriously had to talk myself off that ledge.โ€
Caz chuckles. โ€œYou couldnโ€™t deprive us of that sight. When you chop his cock off, I want a front-row seat.โ€
I lean back for a knuckle touch. โ€œDeal, dude. Wouldnโ€™t want to deprive you of such quality entertainment.โ€ “


Clearwater University: The Complete Series: An Enemies-to-Lovers Romance – Eva Ashwood

Clearwater University
The Complete Series
An Enemies-to-Lovers Romance
Eva Ashwood

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Reverse harem doesnโ€™t occur to them for quite a while!

Emma became best friends with three boys her sophomore year of high school. In her junior year, they turned on her and became her bullies. She and her father moved away but are back in town two years later. Emma starts college, and her tormentors are there and still hating her.

This one was different for several reasons:

1. The hate part of this hate to love goes on for quite a while, well into the second book. Iโ€™m more accustomed to the hate part ending much sooner, so that was a twist. And we still get sex scenes while the hate is still strong. So if you like hate sex, youโ€™ll enjoy this.

2. The reverse harem or menage relationship idea doesnโ€™t occur to the group for quite a while. In most of these, the characters are aware of the possibility from the start. Sometimes they know people in poly relationships. Sometimes at least one of the characters has read books like we are reading right now. But in Clearwater, they donโ€™t realize it is a thing for quite a while and then donโ€™t think it would work because โ€“

3. The guys are competitive, jealous, and angry at each other for most of this. They have been best friends forever, but their relationship has been beaten down by what they have done to Emma. Most of the time, the guys are a team from the start. So I liked they we got some unusual twists here!

The writing was very good. It is long with the three novels together, but it was fast paced. I liked the characters, that the guys all had distinct personalities, and that they all grew over the course of the story.

I didnโ€™t like that Trentโ€™s reason for turning on Emma is immature. We know what it is early on, so I donโ€™t think this is a spoiler. Trent thinks Emma told his father that they saw Trentโ€™s mom kissing Emmaโ€™s dad. And this results in his parents getting divorced. By the time I was 16/17, I knew that marriages are complicated, and cheating is a symptom of greater issues. Trentโ€™s anger at this small thing, even if true, seemed like an 8-10 year oldโ€™s perspective. And then, he gets even angrier when he finds out that Emma introduced his mother to her father at a school event. Why hadnโ€™t Emma and the guys all introduced their parents around when they were still friends in high school? It seems very weird that their parents would let them hang out so much and be best friends without ever meeting their parents. We only see Emmaโ€™s dad and Trentโ€™s mom, but they donโ€™t seem like disconnected, neglectful parents. These are the type of parents that I believe would have insisted on meeting the parents of their kidโ€™s friends. Even if not, they are treating the introduction of their parents as something unusual. Especially when the parents are at the same school event, you just would introduce them. So I had a difficult time suspending disbelief for this.

Another complaint I have is more difficult to talk about without spoilers. Itโ€™s the total 180 of a character that came out of nowhere. It felt like we didnโ€™t get any lead in to this, like we suddenly need a villain, so weโ€™ll change this character completely. I would have preferred more detail on the character and on their past actions, which would make this turnaround more natural and believable.

Because of these two things, I can only give this three stars. But if they wonโ€™t bother you as much as they did me, and you mostly want the hot sex scenes, you may enjoy this more than I did.

Contains many graphic sex scenes. Some are one-on-one and some are group. There is no cheating, scenes with Other People, or Other People drama. There is no non or dubious consent. So this is SAFE. No trigger warnings. Contains foul language. It is well edited. I found 5 little errors.

Fostering Hope (Silver Lining Book 1) – Amanda Perry

Fostering Hope
Silver Lining Book 1
Amanda Perry

Rating: 4 out of 5.

New adult clean reverse harem

After shuffling from one bad foster home to another, Parker is finally taken in by a good family. They have seven sons. Five of them are older than Parker.

This was a clean reverse harem romance, which Iโ€™ve never run into before. There is kissing but just that, no more. I really liked it. It was sweet and a fast read. There was no insta-love. Feelings built slowly. It had some good humor in it, especially with the character of Austyn.

1st person present tense from Parker and the guys.

I found 24 errors. A lot of them were weird like the first letter at the start of a sentence not being capitalized. Word should fix that on its own.

There is some foul language in this.

Surviving Amber Springs: A Stand-alone Contemporary Romance – Siobhan Davis

Surviving Amber Springs
A Stand-alone Contemporary Romance
Siobhan Davis

Rating: 5 out of 5.

High school to college reverse harem romance with crazy feels!

Blaire moved in the middle of her senior year of high school to a new town after her twin brother died. Before school starts, she meets three amazing and hot guys. They had been best friends forever and almost immediately all want her.

I loved this. 5 stars because I would read it again. It was extremely written making for a fast read even though it was pretty long. It needed every word. Things were revealed at the right times along the way, and I donโ€™t want to give any spoilers. Blaire has gone through hell and continues to do so. The story is dramatic but feels real, not like a soap opera. Itโ€™s a story of emotions, good ones, bad ones, and complicated ones.

The characters were complicated and felt real as well. I loved Shaznay, the sister of one of the guys, and she provided some much-needed humor. The sex scenes were hot and added to the story. The story is amazing. Iโ€™d never thought about the families of the instigators of these crimes and what hell it must be for them.

Warnings: This contains references to gun crimes, rape, suicide, and self-harm. Nothing bad happens between the main characters, no non or dubious consent. There are several graphic sex scenes. All are one-on-one, no group sex.

1st person present tense from Blaire. Midway through we get sections from the guys. This was very well edited. I only found 8 errors.

Trick Me Twice: An Enemies to Lovers High School Bully Romance – Becca Steele

Trick Me Twice
An Enemies to Lovers High School Bully Romance
Becca Steele

Rating: 4 out of 5.

Hot British high school bully romance

Carter is a king of the school. Raine is keeping herself hidden away. She seemed weak at first, but she slowly comes out of her shell and becomes strong. I was happy with her by the end. Carter had to mature and get stronger as well. I liked both of these characters because they had flaws and grew as the story progressed. I also liked many of the secondary characters.

The writing was choppy and uncomfortable at first but quickly got better for me. It was a quick read. I wasnโ€™t bored anywhere. I liked it a lot but didnโ€™t love it, so four stars.

This contains three graphic sex scenes, so there is much more story than sex. There is quite a bit of foul language.

1st person past tense from Carter and Raine.

This book is well edited. It is written in British English. Only 8 errors interrupted me.

Broken In: A Cowboy Reverse Harem Romance – Cassie Cole

Broken In
A Cowboy Reverse Harem Romance
Cassie Cole

Rating: 3 out of 5.

Contemporary western reverse harem romance

Cindy just inherited a broken-down ranch. Three brothers just lost their jobs as ranch hands. They all come together to meet each otherโ€™s needs.

This was a hot, quick read. It was entertaining, not too long, and didnโ€™t have too much angst. Itโ€™s a nice spicy read when you just want to relax. Itโ€™s not fantastic or particularly memorable, so I can only give it three stars. But this is perfect when I just want a break from angst, drama, and serious feelings.

Cindy is a strong, independent, and sexually confident woman. The three guys are different enough for my tastes. I donโ€™t like when they are just clones of each other, so I was happy. The story is good enough to keep it going. It didnโ€™t just feel like word porn. I donโ€™t want to give anything away, but I was disappointed not to learn exactly what consequences a villain got in the end. Did they go to jail? Have to pay a lot of monetary damages? We just donโ€™t know.

There is no Other People drama, no cheating, and no slut shaming. So this is SAFE.

1st person past tense from Cindy and the guys.

There were many unnecessary dialogue tags, but they didnโ€™t distract me too much. Mom, Momma, Dad, and so on should be capitalized when not my mom, her mom, etc. like it is a proper name, and that doesnโ€™t happen here. Little things like this grab my attention away. Beyond this, I found 11 other errors โ€“ quotation mark issues and missing words mostly. Not too bad.


Favorite Quote:

Once everything was sorted, I pulled out my laptop and opened up Excel. Without internet I couldnโ€™t connect to my cloud storage; I had to save the file locally, like a peasant.


Full Contact: A College Reverse Harem Romance – Cassie Cole

Full Contact
A College Reverse Harem Romance
Cassie Cole

Rating: 4 out of 5.

College RH with three hot football players

Let me begin by saying, โ€œI hate football.โ€ For me, itโ€™s associated with the men in my family screaming at the TV. Iโ€™ve always hated conflict and raised voices, so this made me cringe. It also broke my concentration when I was trying to read! I was dragged to football games because my parents didnโ€™t want to get a babysitter, so I sat in the stands reading and hating all the rude noise around me. But with all that, I still loved this novel!

I read a paramedic romance last year and knew nothing about that world and loved that novel too. See Crossing The Line. This felt a lot like that. I didnโ€™t understand the football jargon, trusted the author knew what she was talking about, and just moved past it. It added to the realism and didnโ€™t bore me. I think football fans will enjoy it immensely.

The writing was great, aside from unnecessary dialogue tags. It was fast paced with a lot of story. So this isnโ€™t just erotica. But the sex scenes were very hot. This is also SAFE โ€“ no cheating, no Other People problems at all, which was very nice. There was no slut-shaming or villain girls! Overall, I highly recommend this if you like reverse harem / menage romances. Itโ€™s a plus if you like football, but it isnโ€™t necessary that you do.

1st person past tense from Roberta and the three guys.

This is well edited. I found 10 errors. There are also some unnecessary dialogue tags, but there werenโ€™t enough to bother me.



Favorite Quotes:

The outline of his huge cock slid against his shorts, falling across to rest against his other thigh. I got the impression it wasnโ€™t fully hard, but it was thick. Like a damn extra-large stick of Toblerone chocolate.

Aly made an annoyed noise. โ€œDo you have to talk about football? Iโ€™m trying to enjoy all these hunks in tight pants.โ€
โ€œOh, sorry. Didnโ€™t mean to interrupt what really matters.โ€

Feรฑa was wearing a Ralph Lauren polo shirt, and his dark curls looked like theyโ€™d been freshly washed. But below the waist he wore baggy basketball shorts and a pair of gym sneakers. It was a hilarious juxtaposition of styles. Attractive college boy on top, and lazy athlete on the bottom. Like a fashion mullet.

I could see why women loved dating bikers. It was like riding around on a big vibrator.